双非逆袭美国知名MBA-新东方前途出国

本科学校：上海某双非院校

本科专业：食品经济管理

GPA：不到2.5

TOEFL：40+

GRE/GMAT：无

录取项目：

1. Drew University, Master of Science in Finance

2. New York Institute of Technology, Executive M.B.A

由于托福分数始终不太理想，L同学的文书和申请工作开展较晚。不过很快，后期老师就与L同学进行了第一次邮件和群内沟通，明确了文书素材填写的要求，各项时间节点及需要L同学配合的事项等。L同学在我们的指导下，及时寻找推荐人（当时临近网申截止时，紧急联系更换了一位推荐人），积极配合确认文书思路，以及后续各类文书的修改与确认等。

从L同学的背景信息可以看到，硬件是弱项，GPA和托福都比较低，且由于上一年论文未通过而延毕，成绩单上还有2科零分的情况。所幸他的软件条件还算ok，有2段相关性较强的实习，分别在银行和证券公司。

针对同学的情况，在文书构思时，后期老师与之详细商谈，突出L同学的实践经历，并且加入他对金融市场、经济学和会计学的一些深入思考和阐述，以此来体现他关注时事，善于观察与反思的品质。

针对MBA项目和金融项目看重的leadership skills的特质，PS（个人陈述）中也着重突出了他的社团经历，以及他担任体育委员期间锻炼出来的组织协调能力和锲而不舍的体育精神。

另外，L同学能够拿到Drew University MS in Finance 和NYIT Executive M.B.A的offer, 也得益于他的准确定校。当我们在申请前期收到Clark大学和Adelphi大学的拒信后，我们及时与L同学沟通，调整选校策略，增加了额外3所目标院校。

在文书方面，鉴于他的特殊情况，后期老师特地为他撰写了optional essay 来解释低GPA和0分情况，措辞尽量做到诚恳真挚，言之有据。在经过一段时间的焦急等待之后，3月份终于在同一天迎来了2个offer!大家一颗悬着的心也终于落地了。

回想这位同学坎坷波折的申请经历，成功拿到offer的背后离不开我们双方的高效沟通。以及，我们也要充分重视：一篇贴合申请专业且逻辑流畅，体现学生特色的文书，学生良好的自我定位，以及准确的选校，更是取得双赢的不二法宝。

一起来欣赏下文书中的精彩段落：

Since accounting is universally acknowledged as the language of business, the days of witnessing and participating in such accounting works kindled my academic interest in diving into economics and finance. Although accounting, finance, and economics are often taught and presented as separate disciplines, they influence each other and converge in some respects. Accounting acts as the language to interpret numbers, based on which financial tools are applied for a bigger picture of economics. In retrospect, I believe that is why I chose my undergraduate major and am determined to continue my graduate study.

Considering the significance of leadership for future business leaders, I also pay attention to enhancing my relevant abilities within campus activities. For instance, I joined my department’s Student Association and Learning Development Organization. My organization, coordination, and communication techniques are raised through activities such as seeking sponsorships, writing event proposals, and operating a WeChat Official Account. Meanwhile, as the class commissary in charge of sports, I encouraged my classmates to participate in sports activities, through which I became a person who never gave up easily. My traits, such as perseverance, were strengthened through doing sports, which emphasized such sportsmanship as self-control, courage, and persistence.