背景介绍
申请难点
留学规划与提升
首先先介绍下这位同学的录取项目
芝加哥大学 统计学硕士
哥伦比亚大学 运筹学硕士
哥伦比亚大学 统计学硕士
纽约大学 数学硕士（含8000美元奖学金）
The University of Chicago Master's program in Statistics
Columbia University M.S. in Operations Research
Columbia University M.A. in Statistics
New York University M.S. in Mathematics ($8,000 Scholarship)
申请故事
和这位同学的沟通过程三个词即可概括：明确、简洁、高效。多年海外求学的经历为他培养了极强的自主能力，美国开放多元的文化环境也提升了他独立思考的能力和迅速做出判断的决断力。初次沟通，这位同学就思路清晰地列举了自己的优势、弱势以及期望从我们这里获得帮助。初次沟通获得的大量有效信息为我们接下来的头脑风暴打下了良好的基础，也在我们心中留下了“逻辑强大理工男”的印象。
院校解读
留学方案
案例分析
对于这位同学这种思路清晰的学生，沟通成本是非常低的，要做到的就是列出一个详细的时间规划并按时完成。对于文书的创作，这位同学提供了非常多的有效素材，包括他五个月减肥44磅的骄傲经历。这一段在文书中也有所体现，在表现他强大行动力与毅力的同时，也让他的个人形象更加立体生动。作为“非典型理工男”，这位同学社交能力也值得一提，他课余时间还组织志同道合的同学共同进行学术探讨，精进技能的同时，领导力也得到了很好的锻炼、这一段在后续也做了详细的挖掘和陈述。
这位同学本身标化成绩非常优秀，目标也非常明确，在文书沟通过程中非常配合老师工作，最终拿到满意的录取可以说是水到渠成。
文书高光段落
If I cannot, I must; if I must, I certainly can. This is the life motto I have been sticking to and could be exemplified by my recent experience of losing 44 pounds within 5 months. Such determination and perseverance undoubtedly apply in my academic pursuit as well. Fascinated by challenges brought upon courses like stochastic processes and applied mathematical knowledge redefines our daily operation in the financial industry throughout my undergraduate years, I have all geared up for more advanced knowledge relating to the application of statistical methods in the financial field, which I could spot lying in the curriculum of your M.A. in Statistics program.
In addition to hands-on practical experiences, I value the importance of networking with like-minded people and promoting interdisciplinary communication as it would keep me updated with the cutting-edge changes in major fields and sparkling brilliant thoughts. Only if you stay ahead of change, you will be in-demand. During undergraduate study, I got acquainted with many people who are cream of the crop in their academic field. To bring them into connection, I established a technology salon as a platform and hosted group meetings on a weekly basis. Numerous cross-subject projects have been incubated in this platform such as the application of 3-D modeling in real-world fitting rooms and I took pride in that.
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