2017美国本科留学优秀文书如何写-新东方前途出国

　　2017年美国本科申请留学文书的写作重点是什么?随着各种利好条件的出现，赴美本科留学的热潮一直处于不断升温的状态，尽管美国常青藤大学的招生近乎千里挑一，申请者仍然是不遗余力。然而美国名校的申请结果有着太多的不可预测性，那么留学文书写作在申请中的重要性就不言而喻了。无论如何，美国本科申请的文书始终是让众多申请者为之欢喜为之忧的东西。下面为大家带来什么样的文书才算是一篇好的美国留学申请文书呢?

　　首先，你的文书需要有一个鲜明的标签，以及一个有趣的故事，能够让招生官在短短一分钟之内简单明了地概括给招生委员会听，并且足以说服委员会这是个有能力、有想法的孩子。你给自己打上一个足够明确的标签，招生官才可能对你有更明确的定位。你的故事越清晰有力，它被转述的时候就越有吸引力。

　　于是，申请出国留学文书写作的原则就是，尽量集中表现申请人的一个特质，把这个特质描绘得尽可能地鲜明;尽量避免在文书里放入太多的东西，集中笔墨写好一件事情，而不是均匀分配给两件甚至三件事情。

　　如何写一个有趣的故事?

　　故事型文书写作三部曲：

　　第1步：Something happened(Experience)

　　回忆这十多年来一个曾发生在你身上的事情(不平凡的或是出乎意料的)，这段经历可以是一个具体的事件抑或是某个特殊的时刻;

　　第2步：Relate to your qualities & characteristics

　　和自身的性格特质相关联，如善于分析，贵在坚持，抑或真诚有责任感，数一数自己的标签都有什么;

　　第3步：What did you learn?

　　分享自己的所想所获，这个有趣的经历对你的生活有着怎样的影响。

　　真实的人，才有真实的故事

　　真实的你，而不是你想象中的你：

　　什么叫Personal?假设你写这个东西，写出来，你要让你的朋友去看如果能猜到是你，那么你很Personal。而不是你认为名校希望你是什么样的。

　　思想的深度

　　文书的逻辑结构最忌讳的是散，每一个地方都讲一点，结果不能形成一个清晰的逻辑结构。所以很多情况下，申请者以为就是罗列自己的经理和突出的事情，但是写着写着就变成了流水账。

　　生活是文书素材的来源

　　在生活中做个有心人，只有真正做到面对自己的内心、面对自己的过去、并在实践中不断去突破自己，才能利用好文书这个唯一的自述的机会，将自己的个性、成就呈现给招生官，使自己的形象鲜活起来。

　　下面分享一篇2016年申请到美国(Boston College)本科的这位同学的成功文书案例。该同学托福108，SAT1970，单看标化考试成绩并不是很有优势，最终成功申请到美国排名30的波士顿学院，文书对于申请的重要性在这里不言而喻。

　　I was insanely fascinated by our pet dog Tony's bed and addicted to placing myself into it.

　　"How many times do I have to tell you not to?" Mom cautioned with a resigned expression, "that pet bed is not for sitting!"

　　"But Tony seems to enjoy it…I would like to try it too."

　　"I know how much you like Tony, but the bed is not meant for human to squeeze into. Besides, there are germs." Mom continued.

　　The temptation swiftly sets aside my fear of germs and it was funny how I replied my mom that I would rather be a dog.

　　Even though my parents would draw me away from my temporary enjoyment - fitting into the little jacinth bed; but, I will always find the little bed tempting and have the tendency of trying to fit into it again.

　　Pet treatment seems to surpass ours, I thought. It bothers me why Tony could spend his whole afternoon resting in the comfort of his bed while I am not supposed to. Quietly, I attempted it once again. Fitting-in comfortably is a challenge at the beginning. First attempt involved an awkward position that was not fun for anyone's back. It hurts because the bed was situated too close to the wall leaving zero leg room. But as soon as I positioned myself properly and fitting in nicely into its shape, it felt good. Sitting cross-legged and resting on its raised cushion simply gels me into the soft fabric. I remember being able to position almost at the same eye level as Tony which made it more fun. He was equally excited - running, jumping, and licking.

　　This brief illustration of my home pet experience mirrors what I eventually experienced while schooling. I come to realize how changing or transitioning from one school (Beijing's Local Chinese School) to another (Canadian International School) involves more or less the same level of obstacles and challenges. Posed with language barriers, isolation and the sudden disappearance of old friends at the initial phase can be daunting. Sharpening my English was an uphill task, embarrassing initially. However, with persistence and determination like the case of Tony's bed, I eventually succeeded in performing outstandingly in my school exams; earning me Academic Scholarships two years in a row. Like all else, the enjoyment of success simply motivates me. I enjoy my language classes and would always look forward to keeping good attendance. Among others, simple life experiences have trained me to be consistent and remain focused. The idea is not to be constraint by trivial things, but instead focus at the bigger picture. There should always be a strong sense of wanting to achieve when tossed with surprises.

　　Rapid pace of modern living will require some level of relaxation and time to cheer just like the small pet bed perfectly placed at the corner under the soothing warm beam of ray. It was a special moment. The quietness and peace satisfied me and my company. Moist and warm air touched my skin softly as Tony breathed in and out. The pace of my breath followed his, and his followed mine. A time when I was happy to have forgotten being human and instead being in Tony's world. I cherish the time when I could allow my imagination to alternate. It was fun yet educational at the same time.

　　点评：这篇文书清晰明了，可圈可点，没有特别复杂的长难句和词汇;很多日常生活中的想法和事件都被她一一赘述，这种生活化的学术追求，正是名校教授们所向往的!!!

　　从一篇有趣的故事文书中看到共鸣点，看到自己的影子，看到这位学生的独特魅力，再好的留学文书，也不过于此了。

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