表示增补的连接词:and, as well as, besides, furthermore, moreover, not only...but also等
表示转折的连接词:however, in spite, though, but, otherwise, whereas, nonetheless等
表示原因的连接词:since, as, so, because, why等
案例:He was born in a small village. His father was a teacher in the village school. His mother did the housework. He began to go to his father's school at seven. He graduated from it six years later. He went to the junior middle school in a nearby town. He studied at a senior middle school in the county. He was a good student there.
分析:尽管这段话中所有的句子都是正确的,但是句型单一,而且在八个句子中只有"His father"和"His mother"两个不同的主语,其他句子都是以"He"开头的。
修改:He was born in a small village. His father taught at the village school and his mother did the housework. He began to study at his father's school at seven and six years later entered the junior middle school in a nearby town. After graduating from it he was admitted to a senior middle school in the county, where he proved to be a good student.
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