故事主角:T同学
目标专业:经济
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制胜因素:
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自身兴趣与目标院校有真实的连接
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多元化活动贴切纽约大学喜欢的“琴棋书画样样精通”
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选校方案优化,没有盲目冲Stern商学院
主要活动经历:
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学校天文社
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学校商社
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棒球推广活动
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国际英语大赛
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新冠研究
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沃顿商赛
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线上经济课程等
藤苗计划导师说:学生在他的主文书里重点提到关于自己兴趣的故事。学生在之前一直被别人认为是个佛系男孩,但是他发现当他找到了自己所热爱的棒球运动时,他非常愿意为此做出贡献,于是开始着手棒球运动的推广和招募。他会组织试玩,筹备比赛,并为此运动物色场地以及寻找教练,为了自己的热爱去“放肆”努力!
在学生的转正申诉信中,我们提醒学生可以再次凸显自己的领导能力和影响力,学生也将自身的经历与NYU的棒球队做了连接,并表达希望用自身的运动经历,活动筹备,募捐以及领导力为NYU球队做贡献。
在申诉信中,我们协助学生,明确提出了在NYU想要学习的课程与教授。与此同时,我们了解到,纽大很喜欢兴趣多元化的学生,针对这一录取偏好,学生也将额外学习吉他,法语和小说创作的经历更新进了活动表。
故事主角:Z同学
目标专业:不定
致胜因素:
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成长背景与目标院校有贴切的连接
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多元化兴趣爱好
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在转正申诉阶段,听从顾问专业建议
主要活动经历:
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马术
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手工
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合唱
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动物收容所义工
藤苗计划导师说:学生其实本来想学生物但是并没有相关的学术背景。这时候, 我们建议孩子,避开自己的学术劣势,选择不定专业并且去放大自身的特殊经历。比如因为爸爸的职业关系,学生从小在剧组长大并接触电影和导演;因为在美高,不仅接触到了马术,还有自己的一批马;学生喜欢做手工,暑假会在动物收容所做义工等等。
在申诉信中,主要提及到了学生未来的规划,包括如何会利用纽约校内校外的资源发展自己的兴趣,包括电影节或是参与学校的合唱和手工社团等等。
写在最后
纽约大学录取率虽然在逐步降低,我们也观察到校方在增加录取的可能性。这批转正不但提供春季入学(错开秋季入学的人头数限制),还邀请学生先入读LSP两年,之后学生能再转入目标院校。人性化的决策再次证明了NYU对国际生的喜爱!
所以如果你目前还在waitlist上等待,也不要气馁哦!下一波好消息会在6月1号宣布。期待更多小伙伴们能够加入这场Dream Concrete Jungle!
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