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    本科学校:Top 50美本

    本科专业:Industrial Engineering,辅修:Manufacturing Engineering

    GPA:3.7+

    TOEFL:免

    GRE:325+

     

     

     

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    1. 加州伯克利 Industrial Engineering and Operations Research

    2. 密歇根安娜堡 Industrial and Operations Engineering

    3. 宾大 Systems Engineering

     

    W同学主动性很强,一开始就自己写好了简历和文书的初稿。但是她自己写的简历是比较松散的,格式等等不是很严谨,而且时间线上面不是特别完整,所以后期老师在原来的简历基础上做了一些详细的批注和修改。并且考虑到每所学校的文书要求是有一定差异的,后期老师也对W同学自己写的文书给出了建议,比如结合每所学校的项目特点来补充why school。于是W同学很快定稿了主文书。

     

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     My interest in Industrial Engineering has rapidly grown from the seeds plantedin the summer of my junior year as a consultant intern at the Center of QuickResponse Manufacturing. l found myself especially drawn to the combination oftheory and practice in the work. During my internship, I was captivated by themagnitude and intricacies of the manufacturing process, material handlingstrategy, and the details specified within the scheduling plans. Different from atraditional manufacturing company, Lean and Six Sigma principles areunsuitable for small businesses. Dental Crafters, the company l worked for, hadhigh-mix, low-volume criteria for each product, which required an advancedstrategy to improve the manufacturing efficiency. Through accomplishing dataanalysis, creating a process flow chart, and validating the simulation model, lprovided technical recommendations based on the data and model. The coreidea of this project that interests me so much is accommodating the generaloptimized idea to a specific company by investigating labor and equipmentutilization and incorporating new, practical solutions.

    The practice process is the intermediary between academic research and the achievement of ideal manufacturing efficiency. While taking introductory manufacturing courses, I became interested in the application of manufacturing capacity optimization. Through Inspection, Quality Control and Reliability courses that I was enrolled in as a junior, I have gained an understanding of how products are inspected under standard requirements, how to achieve maximum manufacturing efficiency, and how to manage inventory levels to avoid waste. These skills, which I have honed over the past few years, lay a solid foundation for future study. Because analytical research is my most well-developed academic strength, as evidenced by reference letters, the MS Industrial Engineering program is an ideal launch point for a research career in academia. Eventually, I want to build a focused manufacturing industry network where I can help employees, government, and social enterprises understand and address wicked problems at the intersection of manufacturing and management. The skills I aim to acquire through this graduate training are crucial to the evolution of my practice.

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    我对工业工程的兴趣从大三夏天在快速响应制造中心做顾问实习生时种下的种子开始迅速增长。我发现自己在工作中特别喜欢理论与实践的结合。在实习期间,我被制造过程的规模和复杂性、材料处理策略以及调度计划中指定的细节所吸引。与传统的制造企业不同,精益和六西格玛原则不适合小企业。我工作的Dental Crafters公司对每种产品都有高混合、低批量的标准,这需要先进的策略来提高生产效率。通过完成数据分析,制作工艺流程图,验证仿真模型,根据数据和模型提出技术建议。这个项目让我非常感兴趣的核心思想是,通过调查劳动力和设备的利用率,并结合新的、实用的解决方案,将一般优化的想法适应于特定的公司。

    实践过程是学术研究与实现理想制造效率之间的中介。在学习制造入门课程的过程中,我对制造能力优化的应用产生了兴趣。通过大三时参加的Inspection, Quality Control and Reliability课程,我了解了如何在标准要求下检验产品,如何实现最大的生产效率,以及如何管理库存水平以避免浪费。这些技能是我在过去几年里磨练出来的,为以后的学习打下了坚实的基础。因为分析研究是我最成熟的学术优势,正如推荐信所证明的那样,MS工业工程项目是学术界研究生涯的理想起点。最终,我想建立一个专注于制造业的网络,在那里我可以帮助员工、政府和社会企业了解和解决制造和管理交叉的邪恶问题。我希望通过研究生培训获得的技能对我的实践发展至关重要。
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