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      H的故事

      还在上小学H就用一口流利的英语惊艳了前途顾问老师,

      之后六年的陪伴亦师亦友,克服一道道难关助力H拿下梦校offer!

      早早完成“专业启蒙”的受益者


      康奈尔大学农学院大气与地球科学的录取。"]]],["p",{"rPr":{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体"}}},["span",{"data-type":"text"},["span",{"data-type":"leaf"},""]]],["p",{"rPr":{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体"}}},["span",{"data-type":"text"},["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体","hint":"eastAsia"},"data-type":"leaf"},"在确定专业方向后,我们开始对不同的学校开始课程的摸索,当时开始引导H同学在自己感兴趣的目标学校为例子,做专业探索,给H同学的作业是每周search一所学校,看看这所学校里跟气象学相关的专业有哪些,分别有什么特色的课程,我们从中可以做一些什么。当时在我们每一次交谈的时候,也慢慢捋清楚自己的目标,环境科学是气象学方向的基础大专业方向,小分支有大气科学、地球科学、气候学等等。在每一次专业探索以及学习中,H同学也明确自己方向确定,甚至像气候技术、大气技术这些研究生阶段才涉及到的专业,H同学也开始有所了解。虽说气象学是较为冷门的专业,但我也不禁感叹,果然兴趣是最好的老师,引导学生主动探索。我记得当时H同学就问我们说,在选课方面,是不是就需要重理科了?确实是的,也因此,在G"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体"},"data-type":"leaf"},"10-"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体","hint":"eastAsia"},"data-type":"leaf"},"G"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体"},"data-type":"leaf"},"12"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体","hint":"eastAsia"},"data-type":"leaf"},",H同学每一学年的课,都以物理、化学为主。"]]],["p",{"rPr":{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体"}}},["span",{"data-type":"text"},["span",{"data-type":"leaf"},""]]],["p",{"rPr":{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体"}}},["span",{"data-type":"text"},["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体","hint":"eastAsia"},"data-type":"leaf"},"值得一提的是,当时在G"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体"},"data-type":"leaf"},"11"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体","hint":"eastAsia"},"data-type":"leaf"},"上学期的时候,有一天H同学很激动和我们说,他们学校下学期会开一门Atmospheric"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体"},"data-type":"leaf"}," "],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体","hint":"eastAsia"},"data-type":"leaf"},"Science"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体"},"data-type":"leaf"}," "],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体","hint":"eastAsia"},"data-type":"leaf"},"and"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体"},"data-type":"leaf"}," "],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体","hint":"eastAsia"},"data-type":"leaf"},"Climate"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体"},"data-type":"leaf"}," "],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体","hint":"eastAsia"},"data-type":"leaf"},"Change,他是不是可以选。咱们当时还愁H同学背景上没有很多跟气象学相关的学术背景,一听到这个消息,无论是群里的爸爸妈妈还是老师,都立刻反应,赶紧选!!H同学也很争气,不仅抢到了这门课,这门课最后的成绩也是非常优异。回过头来看,H同学的成绩单上是满满的数理化的课程,另外加上大气科学,对口的高中选课,其实真的就是制胜的重要因素之一。"]]],["p",{"rPr":{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体"}}},["span",{"data-type":"text"},["span",{"data-type":"leaf"},""]]],["p",{"rPr":{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体"}}},["span",{"data-type":"text"},["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体","hint":"eastAsia"},"data-type":"leaf"},"说到学术背景,H同学也做了不少跟环境、气象相关的学术活动。今年暑假,H同学和 德州农工大学气象学博士Dr"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体"},"data-type":"leaf"}," "],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体","hint":"eastAsia"},"data-type":"leaf"},"Xu"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体"},"data-type":"leaf"}," "],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体","hint":"eastAsia"},"data-type":"leaf"},"做了一个关于2"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体"},"data-type":"leaf"},"022"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体","hint":"eastAsia"},"data-type":"leaf"},"年全球热浪的气象学分析,同时,在这个暑假参加的哈佛夏校里面,选了一门"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体"},"data-type":"leaf"},"海洋生物和海洋生态系统"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体","hint":"eastAsia"},"data-type":"leaf"},"和一门物理,均拿了A。同样在这个暑假,H同学的SAT冲到了1"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体"},"data-type":"leaf"},"520"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体","hint":"eastAsia"},"data-type":"leaf"},"(拼分1"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体"},"data-type":"leaf"},"530"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体","hint":"eastAsia"},"data-type":"leaf"},"),虽然离目标1"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体"},"data-type":"leaf"},"550"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体","hint":"eastAsia"},"data-type":"leaf"},"还差一点点,但总体来说还是较为满意的。能在短短暑假3个月完成这么多条线的任务,在8月2"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体"},"data-type":"leaf"},"7"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体","hint":"eastAsia"},"data-type":"leaf"},"号考完SAT后,H同学才稍稍松了一口气。正当他才休息不到一周,又紧急开始文书的撰写和G"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体"},"data-type":"leaf"},"12"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体","hint":"eastAsia"},"data-type":"leaf"},"的开学。作为老师,其实虽有一点心疼,但为了目标,为了梦校康奈尔,奋斗还需继续。"]]],["p",{"rPr":{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体"}}},["span",{"data-type":"text"},["span",{"data-type":"leaf"},""]]],["p",{"rPr":{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体"}}},["span",{"data-type":"text"},["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体","hint":"eastAsia"},"data-type":"leaf"},"有时候总感觉H同学会被我们逼的很紧,怕他扛不住的时候,他自己倒是会自娱自乐,因为在规划中,咱们经常提到公益活动和兴趣爱好也不能少哦~H同学是真的会把老师说的记在心里,回头就马上干起来。在学校,他会作为学弟学妹的tutor,帮助学校的萌新适应学校的生活和学习;会参加学校的高尔夫球比赛,一杆老鹰球远程迷倒了群里各位老师;也会组织和同学一起参加比赛,如HiMcM,当然这个数学建模也是和气象学相关的"],["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体"},"data-type":"leaf"},"…… "]]],["p",{"rPr":{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体"}}},["span",{"data-type":"text"},["span",{"data-type":"leaf"},""]]],["p",{"rPr":{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体","hint":"eastAsia"}}},["span",{"data-type":"text"},["span",{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体","hint":"eastAsia"},"data-type":"leaf"},"回顾于此,其实H同学从很早之前就确立了自己的目标和专业,通过有效且有方向的规划,踏踏实实往自己的梦想靠近,不忘初心,方得始终,就是这个道理。"]]],["p",{"rPr":{"fonts":{"ascii":"宋体","eastAsia":"宋体","hAnsi":"宋体","hint":"eastAsia"}}},["span",{"data-type":"text"},["span",{"data-type":"leaf"},""]]]]" style="margin: 0px 8px; padding: 0px; outline: 0px; max-width: 100%; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: system-ui, -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Hiragino Sans GB", "Microsoft YaHei UI", "Microsoft YaHei", Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 17px; letter-spacing: 0.544px; line-height: 1.75em; visibility: visible; box-sizing: border-box !important; overflow-wrap: break-word 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      “老师,我觉得气象学这个专业我挺感兴趣的,我父母也支持!”

       

      H在规划阶段的优势之一在于他很早就确定了心仪专业在很多学生还在纠结选什么专业的时候,H很早就明确了申请专业方向。然而气象学的大方向下仍有许多小分支,开设相关专业的院校也不在少数。

       

      为了更好的锁定具体专业和院校,前途顾问老师开始引导开始H对不同的学校进行专业探索H每周会去详细了解一所学校,看这所学校跟气象学相关的专业有哪些,分别有什么特色的课程,我们能做一些什么准备。


      在H与前途中期顾问老师一次次交谈中,慢慢捋清楚了自己的目标。虽说气象学是较为冷门的专业,但兴趣才是引导者。在前途顾问老师前期的引导和H的主动探索下,不用老师提醒他就明白了之后的选课需要重理科,并在G10-G12每一学年的课,都以物理、化学为主,并每门都保持着优异的成绩。


      最后在申请阶段,H同学的成绩单上是满满的数理化的课程,可以说在留学规划阶段,尽早的完成“专业启蒙”,围绕专业选对口的高中课程,其实就是制胜的重要因素之一。



      “背提”项目、标化成绩双开花


       

      在完成了留学规划中的“专业启蒙”后,前途顾问老师对H制定了学术管理和背景提升的规划方案。申请藤校的准备工作从来都不会轻松,前途顾问老师与H一再强调公益活动和兴趣爱好的重要性,H也以超强执行力完成了多项规划任务。


      在背景提升项目选择方面,H参与了不少跟环境、气象相关的学术活动。在一年暑假期间,H和德州农工大学气象学博士Dr Xu 做了一个“关于2022年全球热浪的气象学分析”,同时,在暑假参加的哈佛夏校里面,选了一门海洋生物和海洋生态系统和一门物理,均拿了A的好成绩


      同样在这个暑假,H同学的SAT冲到了1520(拼分1530),在8月考完SAT后,H才稍稍松了一口气。能在短短3个月完成这么多条线的任务后,才休息不到一周,又紧急开始文书的撰写和G12的开学。


      回顾这段经历,H同学很早之前就确立了目标和专业,通过有效且有方向的规划完成背景提升、校内GPA和标化成绩等多项规划任务。踏踏实实往自己的梦想靠近,不忘初心,方得始终,就是这个道理。



      给申请文书增添亮点的经验之谈


      H的主文书开始得比他班上的同学都要晚。在9月初的时候,H表示班上绝大部分同学已经完成主文书。而在9月中下旬的时候,H同学的初稿仍是不尽如人意。

      在这个关键节点前途后期顾问老师与H以及他的父母开启了脑暴式讨论,结合其他前途顾问老师提供的建议,对文书部分进行了调整指导:

      最开始,文书中描述的过去7年马术之旅主要定位在于有效交流能力。在多番讨论后,前途后期顾问老师决定加入一些元素:人与马之间跨物种的情感、探索自然、在团队项目中领导力等,并调整了原本枯燥的文书开头以及结尾,最终呈现一版个人特质突出的文书,让H在众多申请者中脱颖而出。

      最后,恭喜H完成最初的梦想,并感谢前途顾问老师6年的专业指导,也祝愿追逐梦想院校的每位学子早日收到心仪院校的offer,新东方前途留学祝您乘风破浪,载誉而归。

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