背景介绍
申请难点
留学规划与提升
申请故事
每个学生都有各自不同的特点,因此申请过程并不是千篇一律地进行。因为有学生的参与,带着不同的闪光点和特色,申请团队的老师会迸发出不同的灵感和思路,最终收获不同的结果。
这位同学可以说是学霸的代表,钻研学术的一把好手,性格沉稳言语不多,将大部分时间都奉献给了自己热爱的计算机学习中。因此他聘请了一位仔细优秀的申请助理——他的母上大人。
院校解读
留学方案
案例分析
整个申请过程中这位同学参与相对较少,但家长仔细认真的性格很好地配合了我们。这位同学的硬实力无可挑剔,我们主攻的是文书部分。对于文书思路的把控,这位同学有着自己独特的想法。在经过激烈的头脑风暴后,我们已经能揣摩出这位同学的性格和偏好。因此,在写作中我们注重表达这位同学在计算机领域扎实的知识结构以及对金融领域的独到见解。除了之外,我们还强调了这位同学强大的学习能力和丰富的实习经历,且刻画了这位同学在不同经历后的所感所得,为招生官塑造了立体的学生形象。这样一个充满学术激情和求知欲的形象最终打动了哥伦比亚大学的教授,为这位同学送来了金融工程硕士项目的录取。
成功总是留给有准备的人。这位同学从大一就签约新东方,很好地完成了背景提升,他感谢我们在申请过程中所付出的指导,但我们告诉他,最应该感谢的是出色和努力的自己。
文书高光段落
Since I was in senior high school, I’ve had great passion for both programming and finance. When I first met programming in computer class, I was deeply fascinated by the fact that such extensive use and spectacular speed could be achieved by simply combining basic instructions together, and felt that programming is like the supercar of my mind, enabling me to solve problems millions of times more complicated than I could reach. Meanwhile, I’ve always been desperately bothered by all kinds of uncertainties in my life and the bad luck that usually follows, and it was finance that showed me the possibility to get rid of them — through many financial concepts, such as hedging, portfolio and financial derivatives, I sensed the same character: spreading the risk and ensuring one’s benefit with information and strategies, which I think is the key against uncertainties and bad luck, my worst concerns in my life. Regarding my strong eager to include both of these subjects into my future career, I believe financial mathematics would be an ideal track for me.
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