由于受到中国传统英文写作思维的影响，很多考生在托福考试的写作都考不出很高的分数，从而影响自己托福的整体分数。今天上海新东方前途出国留学的老师就为大家列出一些托福考试开头部分同学们容易犯的错误。
1、托福作文中需要避免的开头方式—废话连篇不知所云
典型失败案例： Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?
This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……
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In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。
Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information?
Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life。
Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection
Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!
2、托福作文中需要避免的开头方式—中式英文人见人晕
典型失败案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life
In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……
Topic 2- The population problem
The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there。
Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?
I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……
Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person
Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”。
3、托福作文中需要避免的开头方式—观点模糊态度暧昧
典型失败案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……
4、托福作文中需要避免的开头方式—偏离主题无轨电车
典型失败案例：Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places。
5、托福作文中需要避免的开头方式—语法错误惨不忍睹
典型失败案例：Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?
About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should。
看了上海新东方前途出国留学的老师为大家列出的这些错误，同学们有没有恍然大悟的感觉呢？希望大家能够吸取以上的错误的教训，改进自己托福写作的开头，从而取得更高的托福分数。【如有任何疑问，欢迎随时咨询新东方前途出国留学在线专业老师】
>怎么样？看完上海新东方前途出国留学的老师为您带来的塔斯马尼亚大学的一些介绍，是不是对这个美丽岛屿上的特点鲜明的学校有了好感了呢？【如有任何疑问，欢迎随时咨询新东方前途出国留学在线专业老师】
