这位同学(中)和指导老师朱倩(左)、Keith(右)合影
姓名:这位同学
年龄:17
毕业院校:南外本部
申请目标与专业:美国
申请时间:2013年秋季
标准化考试成绩:Toefl 111 Sat1 2250
录取院校:Pomona college (全美文理学院排名第四)
指导老师:KEITH(文书老师)/朱倩(前期老师)
这位同学的名校梦
这位同学很早就有较好的标准化成绩,提前批次申请时没有申请ED的学校,只EA申请了芝加哥大学。但没想到今年申请形势非常严峻,芝加哥提前批次出结果的时候,把这位同学放在了等待名单中。家长和孩子非常焦虑,并多次来公司与文书老师沟通,决定ED2申请 POMONA COLLEGE。确定好学校后,外籍文书老师与前期顾问老师全力配合,最终收获了满意的OFFER。
申请顾问:朱倩
官方博客:https://qiantu.xdf.cn/blog/zhuqian3/
美国本科部资深留学顾问,曾留学工作澳洲六年,拥有国际商贸和酒店管理双学士学位。遍访多国名校,对国外教育与文化有深刻认知。工作细致认真,能准确把握美国大学申请及录取动态,擅长挖掘学生领导力,创造力及社会活动能力,为学生制定个性化留学方案。亲身的海外经历,良好的职业素养,丰富的专业知识不仅可以设身处地地为学生提供留学服务,还可以感同身受地与学生分享留学经验, 深受学生和家长信赖。工作期间帮助数十名学生申请到芝加哥大学、埃默里大学、加州洛杉矶、南加州大学、纽约大学等美国名校。
美籍文书指导:Keith
美国籍韩裔,中文名:李源。 南京新东方前途出国美国高端本科部主管,南京新东方美本专家团成员, 卫斯理大学(Wesleyan University)经济专业毕业,对美国高端院校申请拥有丰富的指导经验,曾指导近百名学生申请到美国排名前20名校。
美籍文书Keith老师点评:
When Yuan joined the Workshop he already proved himself to be a very capable math and science student, bringing with him perfect SAT Subject scores in Math, Physics, and Chemistry along with prizes from city and province competitions. These accomplishments, along with his excellent test scores, already gave him a good chance at many top-ranking schools, but as I got to know the student better he revealed a brave sense of innovation that led to his greatest high school accomplishments.
He first surprised me when he told me what class he took at Summer Institute for the Gifted at Princeton: Laugh Track, the comedy class. He revealed a passion for performance and entertainment that people did not realize at first glance (this entertaining style also played a role in his exciting supplement essays). When he talked about his iPhone app experience we realized he also had an innovative spark that he could use to give back to his school, eventually founding the NFLS Apple club. With this momentum, Yuan wrote draft after draft proving that he was much more than a science student; he had an honest desire to make people happy. From there, I just needed to help him find a focus in his essays while teaching him some editing techniques. In the end, Wentao rose beyond my expectations and I can honestly say it was a delight working with him.
这位同学是南京新东方workshop班学员,把好学生聚集到一起,给孩子们提供交流的平台和专业的升学指导,是新东方WORKSHOP班的开课宗旨。这位同学申请时TOEFL111,SAT1 2250 , SAT2 2400,理科成绩非常优秀的他,曾获得市级和省级很多奖项。优秀的标准化考试成绩,各类竞赛奖项,这些为这位同学申请前10名学校提供了敲门砖。
申请期,这位同学几乎天天和外教KEITH老师在一起,交流中发现,这位同学是个非常有主见有思想,充满激情和梦想的孩子。他不只学习好,课余生活也很丰富,高一时曾去美国普林斯顿大学参加过暑期课程,并独树一帜地选择了喜剧课程。此外这位同学对电子产品特别着迷,喜欢研究IPHONE各类应用程序,并在南京外国语学校创立了苹果社团,让同学们在社团中交流。
丰富的活动背景以及卓越领导能力和创新能力,使得他终于获得POMONA COLLEGE招生官老师的认可,收到心仪已久的OFFER。
OFFER只是新生活的开始,我们所有新东方老师祝愿这位同学有无比闪耀的未来。
OFFER展示: