如何撰写长篇留学文书呢?其实长一点的文书就更能很好的去讲一个故事了,可以更好地展示学生。以下是650字以内的common一篇文书。下面我们一起学习一下美国本科留学经历类文书范文。马上在线咨询>>>>
美国本科留学经历类文书范文
With clay and strings filling in my hands, people surrounded me asking “what are you doing?” “Did you make that beautiful bead by hand?” etc. Every time I thought about the challenges and successes I encountered during the formation of the club, I felt that what I could do might be small but it had the potential to be great! It encouraged me to do more and inspired me to take risks. How can I reach my potential in life without risks?
Since I came to America, an idea popped into to my mind one day because I wanted to introduce myself specially and build a closer relationship with my classmates. I chose to start a club because most clubs I belonged to seemed always to talk about what the members would do but we never really engaged in these activities. Honestly, I knew I was taking a risk. What if no one came? What if the club was not approved by the school, especially in the middle of the semester? Nevertheless, I was convinced that it deserved a try, since it might not only help myself to know more people but also help others be familiar with the culture of my home country and enjoyed activities in school. I went to the teachers in charge and class president time and time again for supports, advocating the advantages of my club, as well as designing posters as advertisements. Taking advantages of the holiday back to China, I bought the necessary materials and brought them to school. Through my persistence and solid proposal, the Craft club was approved.
Then the curtains unfolded and the party began. I explained the technique and demonstrate the technique to make Ceramic beads and bracelets. Some students thought it was too messy working with clay, and went away, but some became curious about my work and told me that it was awesome to make things with their own hands, even designing their own figures. As the organizer of the club, I wanted to promote its reputation and expand the club, so I exhibited our works during the club fair, changed places to attracting people, gave our works as gifts to passersby, and even organized inner team competitions, etc. I could not be more delighted about the outcome of the Craft Club!马上在线咨询>>>>
Through these activities, not only did I make friends, but I also integrated Chinese culture with that of America. One of my friends who was interested in Chinese handiwork and culture even decided to visit me after graduation. I was really happy to see that my elaborate preparation and decisive determination brought my classmate so much pleasure for their school life. Therefore, the small risk I took led to a meaningful achievement, which I hope I can develop more in the future. Maybe the Craft Club is just a small club in high school, but it convinced me that I can do more from every small action.
在写作此类型文书有两个标准:一是把experience讲清楚,事情是怎么发生发展的,是什么事情,有什么意义,二是申请人在这件事情中是什么角色,做了什么,想了什么,得到什么,获得哪些成长与收获。
最大的误区就是只是讲故事,而不突出自己的角色,故事只是你的一个载体,我们要求申请人一定要在写作时,写出自己在整个事件中作用和角色,成长与收获,以此帮助招生了解你的世界观、价值观、个人能力以及出众之处。
总之分享一篇你的个人经历,我们一定要抓住重点,以自己为主题,事件为载体,很好的表现出申请人的自身特点特长和能力及思想。祝各位申请人申请顺利。马上在线咨询>>>>
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