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该生原稿【语言错误多并且生硬】：Dearmadam,ThankyouforthewaitlistupdatemessageandIdecidetostayonthewaitinglistbecauseParsonsisalwaysmyfirstchoice.However,currentlyIamfacedwithadilemma.LIMCollegehasofferedmeaplaceoftheFashionMerchandisingandRetailManagementprogram,andrequiredmetodecidewhethertoacceptitbefore17May,2016.Hence,IwillhavetoacceptthisofferincasethatParsonsrejectsmeintheend，whichreallytorturesmyheartnow.Honestly,IdonotwanttogiveupmydreamschoolParsons.Recently,Ihavesuccessfullypassedmygraduationthesisdefenseandwashighlyestimatedbythedissertationcommittee,soIhavestrongconfidenceinmyacademicabilities,andthat’swhyIadmireMSStrategicDesign&Managementmost.Ithinkmycapabilityandinnovativethinkingperfectlymatchtheeducationalmissionoftheprogram.Isincerelyhopethatyoucouldgivemeachanceofaninterview，asIwantthecommitteeassessmysuitabilityofthecourse,andIwillreallyappreciateifyoucouldgiveanyfurtheradviceformyapplication.Thanksforyourtimeandconsideration.修改稿（复制粘贴到格式变动导致单词转行时分开，见谅）：DearSirorMadam,IwouldfirstliketothankyouforyourupdateregardingmyplacementonParsons’waitlist.ParsonsSchoolofDesignhasalwaysbeenmyfirstchoice;thusIamwillingtoremainonthewaitlist.However,asoflate,Iamfacingacritical,time-sensitiveissue.LIMCollegehasacceptedmeintotheirFashionMerchandisingandRetailManagementprogram.IamrequiredtodecideontheirofferbyMay17.ButmydreamschoolisParsons.Itwoulddevastatemetolosetheopportunitytoattendyourschool.Yetduetotheshorttimewindow,IfeelpressuredtoacceptthisofferfromLIMCollegeincaseIamunsuccessfulinenrollingatParsons.Thus,Iamwritingtorequestaninterviewandaformalassessmentofmysuitabilityfortheprogram.Recently,IhavesuccessfullypassedmyThesisDefenseandwashighlyrecommendedbythedissertationcommittee.Theywereimpressedwithmyacademicabilitiesandcommitmenttotheprogram.TheyhaveinspiredmetopursueaMasterofScienceinStrategicDesignandManagement.Iamconfidentthatmyacademiccapabilitiesandmyinnovativewaysofthinkingareperfectlyalignedwithyourprogram’smission.
Isincerelyrequestthatyouconsidertheurgencyofmysituationandadvisemeonthebestwaytoproceedwithmyapplication.Thankyouforyourtimeandconsideration.Ilookforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.Sincerely,(name)
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