首尾呼应重视两个问题:
A:语言很夸张,并且没有说服力。有的推荐人把申请人的水平写的比自己的还高。读完这样的推荐信,我想招生官们也是醉了吧。既然申请人的水平如此之高,他是不是就不需要来我们学校进修了。
Eg. : In my numerous years of teaching experience, I rarely have seen as talented or dedicated a student as Mr. Zhang. I consider him my own source of inspiration. 把申请人看作my own source of inspiration(自己灵魂的源泉),是不是有些太过了呢?
B:还有一些推荐人写的内容很荒谬,连自己看了都不敢相信。
Eg. : As his director, I was immediately impressed by his enthusiasm and diligence towards his major. Several times I would telephone him before seven in the morning, only to find his dormitory mates sleepily answering that he had left for his studies.
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