TA的案例
more托福分数不高,就申请不到好学校?
分类:留学新闻2019-03-15
她,含着金勺子出生,父慈母爱,但是性格却很谦逊,有亲和力。2017年参加了我公司举办的高中校长见面会,作为volunteer给校长做翻译。校长对于她的表现给予了很高的评价。之后她还参加了哈峰会,这是一场可以体验哈佛学子的生活和学习的活动。这次活动对于她的影响是很深远的。之后她托福虽然考到了79,确实在申请上面竞争力还是很弱的。
申请过程及亮点
前期老师很果断的给她定了校,主文书是以哈峰会对于她的影响为主线来写。她说她能选上参加这个活动是非常幸运的,就像中了魔法一样。所以文书其实也写的也具有很强的魔幻色彩。
The little fairy told Cinderella:“ if I could use magic to make you gorgeous, but you must return to your original position before twelve o'clock. ” If you were given a chance to be different you and have a different but limited life, are you willing to accept this change?
Such big magic came to me when I applied to the HSYLC, which is short of Harvard Summit for Young Leaders in China and you could have a real experience of Harvard life in nine days and only those excellent, talented, aspiring students will be selected. Before I signed up, I actually had a little flinching and thought that there were so many competitors so they wouldn't pick me. However, I still signed up, and at that moment I did not care about whether I could be enrolled or not. Maybe I am the Cinderella chosen by the fairy.
在经过漫长的等待,最终学生拿到了雪城的双录、贝勒大学以及石溪等不错的学校录取。
经验总结
在整个申请过程中,起主导作用的也许是申请时间,或许是对于学校各种要求的把控,所以选一位很有经验的前期老师是很重要的。我们这里就要为这位学生的前期老师打call,她的果断定校为学生争取了时间,为学生能录取到这么适合的学校奠定了基础。
