5月21日雅思笔试写作真题全解析 | 附高分范文
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Commodities such as cars, TV, and refrigerators that were luxuries decades ago have become basic essentials of a comfortable lifestyle today. While some suggest that everyone should be in possession of them, I believe it can exert more undesirable consequences on society in the long run.
The pursuit of a higher standard of living has become the common aspiration of everyone. Cars provide the flexibility of autonomous travel; televisions are used as convenient sources of news and entertainment, and refrigerators help to preserve food so as to offer a wider range of diet choices. To the whole society, high demand of them implies a growing economy, as the increasing sales figures for cars and household equipment often mean that more employment opportunities are created and a great deal of wealth can be accumulated.
However, there are potential problems. Primarily, mass car ownership is often held responsible for severe traffic congestion and pollution problems, and exhaust emissions from cars lower the air quality, resulting in the prevalence of chronic respiratory diseases and consequently affecting the health of the general public. Secondly, many believe that we have developed into a ‘throw-away’ society since the environment is filling up with a staggering amount of electronic waste. Nowadays, society is strongly influenced by consumerism, and therefore people’s consuming habits are built on the notion of keeping buying latest version of household items. Evidently, this trend takes a huge toll on the environment and the world’s resources.
To conclude, excessive consumption of cars, televisions, and refrigerators is detrimental and unsustainable to the long-term development of the whole society.
重点词汇/语料
commodities 商品
essentials 生活必需品
in possession of 拥有
exert 产生
aspiration 渴望
autonomous travel 自由出行
diet choices 饮食选择
household equipment 家庭设备
severe traffic congestion 严重交通拥堵
exhaust emissions 尾气排放
chronic respiratory diseases 慢性呼吸系统疾病
a ‘throw-away’ society“废品”社会
a staggering amount of electronic waste 数量惊人的电子垃圾
consumerism 消费主义
take a huge toll on 对……造成了巨大损失
excessive 过多的
detrimental 有害的
unsustainable 不可持续的