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    10.16雅思写作考题解析

    2021-11-14
     题目解析:

    今天的考题是国际援助类话题,一些人认为帮助发展中国家最有效的方式是经济援助,另外一些人认为给实际的帮助和建议更重要,讨论双边观点。老徐写作班第三节课讲了这个话题。

         一方面许多发展中国家确实需要经济援助financial assistanceeconomic aid。首先,许多贫穷的国家还没有解决温饱问题provide adequate food and clothing for citizens。他们缺乏粮食,干净的饮用水,必备药品和住所lack food, clean watermedicine and shelter如果国际组织能提供金钱上的帮助,这些贫困国家可以利用这笔钱来买食物和日常必需品。因此,物质上的帮助对于他们的生存是必要的financial support is essential for their survival,否则每年会有许多人死于饥饿和疾病die of hunger and diseases every year。其次,发展中国家还可以利用这笔钱来投入到基础设施的建设中provide basic facilities to their citizens,例如建学校,医院,和公共交通设施schools, hospitals, and public transport,为人们提供更好的生活条件。


    但是,光有金钱上的帮助是不够的,所以其他人觉得实物的帮助和建议更重要。首先,金钱上的帮助是不可持续的和不可靠的unsustainable and unreliable,因为国际组织的财政资源也是有限的。如果这些机构能够提供一些先进科学技术,管理经验advanced technology and managerial experience,就可以教会发展中国家怎么样更好的依靠自己的优势发展经济,创造就业better rely on their domestic strengths to develop economy andcreate employment彻底让穷国脱贫eradicate poverty。但是如果国际社会组织持续不断地提供金钱上的帮助,这些国家可能会过度依赖国际援助become overly dependent on international aid,从长远看阻碍了发展中国的成长和发展undermine the development of these countries in the long term。其次,在某些国家,贫穷的根本原因是腐败root cause of poverty is corruption。金钱援助很有可能被某些本国政府人员贪污了be appropriated by government officials,最后,穷人还是没有得到帮助have no access to the aid


    另一个思路解析:

    这是一道双边讨论类的题目,讨论的是对发展中国家的援助资金更好还是实际的帮助和建议更好。同学们可以自由讨论双方各自的利弊,持中立或单边支持的立场都可以。审题的时候要注意限定范围:Developing countries,要结合发展中国家的情况进行讨论,同时两个观点都带有比较词preferbetter,因此需要解释为什么双方各自的办法更好

     

    资金援助的好处是及时高效,许多发展中国家急需资金发展本国的基础设施建设。比如,一些发展中国家至今还喝不到干净的水,所以国际组织及时的资金支持是很有必要的。但资金援助的缺点也很明显,比如一些腐败官僚拿着国际组织援助的资金不干实事,贪污腐败为己所用,切实的民生问题并没有得到解决,这造成了不良的社会影响。


    实际的技术支持和建议也很重要,因为它可以根据实际情况来解决相应的问题,并产生长期的效益。

     

    今天的这篇高分范文语言简洁准确,在表达“发展中国家”“资金援助”“实际帮助”等时使用了多种表达,大家可以积累丰富的语料,准备好小本子哦~


    高分范文

     

    Nowadays many world wide organizations are providing financial assistance to developing countries. However, a group of people advocate that financial support is required but some technical helpwould be more useful. This essay will discuss both the view points before arriving at a conclusion.

     

    There are several reasons why monetary helpis beneficial for developing nations. Firstly, many emergent countries arestruggling with the problems related to basic infrastructure like roads, railways and public transportation. Therefore, they need financial support from external bodies to complete unfinished projects and also to launch new ones. Secondly, a number of developing and undeveloped countries are not able to provide basic facilities to their citizens. For example, millions of people living in poor countries still do not have access to food, water or sanitation.

     

    In order to provide these basic requirements, the government needs funds from international companies. For instance, according to a report submitted by WHO, 88 percent of developing nations are taking advantage of financial support provided by the World Bank. As a result, billions of people from across the world are able to get access to basic facilities.

     

    However, financial aid alone will not help. Developing nations also need technical support and practical advice. It has been observed that the money sanctioned by world agencies for development is not always utilized for the right purpose. Instead, it is used by corrupt politicians to serve their interests. Therefore, many developing nations are facing issues like corruption, scams etc. It would be quite helpful if they can also get some practical support and advice to boost their economy.

     

     

    In conclusion, international organizations should help developing countries to grow by providing financial support. However, in my opinion, it is equally important to provide some practice advice as it will help them overcome their problems.


    相关词汇

     

    world wide organizations 世界组织

    financial assistance 财政支持

    technical help 技术支持

    monetary help 资金支持

    be beneficial for 对……有益

    developing nations 发展中国家

    emergent countries 新兴国家

    struggling with 挣扎……

    launch new project 开展新的项目

    provide...to... 为……提供……

    have access to 使用;接近;可以利用

    practical advice 实际的建议

    sanction vt. 制裁,处罚;批准;鼓励

    utilize 利用

    serve one's interests 符合某人的利益

    corruption 腐败

    scams 诈骗;诡计

    boost their economy 加速经济发展

    overcome problems 克服难题




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