【转载】2014年11月托福写作预测机经及思路梳理
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2014年11月托福写作预测机经及思路梳理
很多同学在拿到机经之后，仍然会没有思路，想不到例证，所以不给写作思路的机经都不是好机经。因此，针对这种情况，笔者从11月份的小范围机经中精心筛选出几道难度较大的题目，并对其进行思路梳理和事例佐证，希望对考生的写作有所帮助。
NO.1
Agree of disagree:
The food we ate in the past is healthier than the food today。
解析：题目实际上是一种古今对比的题目，即过去和现在食物的健康性对比。对于古今对比类题目笔者推荐使用“总分总”的结构，在段内进行现在和过去进行对比论证，即现在如何如何，过去如何如何。笔者的观点是同意，认为食物在过去比现在更健康。
全文思路结构：
理由一：农药化肥的使用：(agriculture chemicals/ fertilizer)随着现代农业技术(农药化肥)的使用，现在的食物被污染了,过去的食物是纯天然的，(To begin with, the wide use of agriculture chemicals and fertilizers make the food today unhealthier than the food in the past). This is because the food today are polluted by these chemical material. For example, in the past, people cleaned the weeps to safeguard the corn in the field by manual labors. However, farmers will use herbicide and chemicals to achieve this goal. Therefore, some poisonous material will remain on the crops we eat.
理由二：饮食习惯的改变：(changes in the habit of eating are another factor in making the food today much unhealthier) 随着生活节奏的加快，人们更多的会选择吃快餐，而这些快餐是一些垃圾食品，对我们的身体会有负面影响，比如说造成肥胖，疾病等。(with the life pace accelerating, people today tend to eat the fast food which is nothing but junk food. By contrast, in the past, people have more spare time, they would like to cook by themselves) 在过去人们生活更加悠闲，所以会选择在家里自己做饭。
结尾段：有些人认为现在的食物比过去的食物更健康，因为人们吃的食物种类比以前更丰 富了。但是这个理由和我们观点的理由比起来暗淡无光。 所以我还是认为过去的食物比现在的食物更健康。(Some people may assert that food today is much healthier, because there are more diverse food than before. However, this reason seems lackluster compared with that of our opinion.)
NO.2
A/D: Teachers today are not respected as much as they were in the past.
解析：这道题目同样是古今对比，所以同样的立论文。笔者的观点是同意，认为过去的人们更尊重老师。
全文思路结构
理由一：知识来源增多了，降低了教师的权威性。there are more sources of information and knowledge today. 在过去，老师是唯一的知识来源，老师所说的话就是权威，而现在学生可以从互联网和书籍中去获取知识，老师的地位受到挑战.
理由二：教育体制的改变，老师的角色发生了变化, (with the reforms of educational system, the role of teachers has changed a lot).过去是教师主导，现在是学生主导的课堂 (in the past , teacher-oriented class, today, student-oriented class)跟老师顶嘴，打断老师的说话，扰乱课堂秩序，课下见了老师不打招呼
结尾段：综上所述，现在的老师不如以前受尊重了，因为孩子获得知识的途径增加了和课堂角色的变化。
NO.3
A/D:
School teachers should be required to take courses every five years to update their knowledge.
解析：这个题目是一个“应不应该的问题”，笔者建议大家使用“总分总”的结构，这样结构清晰，观点明确。我们的观点是同意，认为老师应该每五年跟新知识。
全文思路结构：
理由一：对老师好，可以增强老师的能力(School teachers should take courses every five years to update their knowledge for improving the quality and ability of teachers especially the improvement of teaching methods and operation of advanced teaching instrument)教学方法(immersed teaching method, grammar teaching method, Video audio method)，教学仪器的使用，(电脑,多媒体)
理由二：对学生好，可以给学生更全面的知识，培养学生对学习的兴趣 Requiring teachers to update their knowledge is beneficial for students because the improvement of teachers’ teaching ability can enhance the efficiency of class. ，比如说一个英语老师如果了解希腊神话的话，可以在教授八大行星的名称的时候，结合神话里的人物名称来让学生的更好的学习。
结尾段：虽然每五年更新知识会占用老师的休闲时间，影响他们的休息，但是这个缺点与优点相比不值一提，所以我还是认为老师应该每五年更新知识。
NO.4
A/D: It is better for government to spend money on building future housing or preserving historic or traditional buildings and homes?
解析: 这个题目有明显的两个方面，即“建造未来的房子”还是 “保护传统的建筑”， 这样的题目使用“让步+转折+递进”，这样的话两个方面各想1-2个理由就好了。
全文思路结构：
让步段： 不可否认，投资于建造新建筑上好，因为可以提升人们的生活质量。(Admittedly, it is good for government to spend money on building future housing in order to improve the quality of life. Construction of new hospital and apartment can serve as two examples to shed lights on this point. )
转折段：但是，投资保护传统建筑也是极好的，因为可以保证文化的代代传承。 (However, it is also good for government to spend money on preserving the traditional buildings for the sake of passing on the culture from generation to generation. The reason underlying this claim is that the traditional buildings are a good symbol of our culture. )
递进段：因此，我不能同意政府把钱投资到建设新建筑要比投资到保护传统建筑上更好。 在我看来，保护旧建筑要比建设新建筑更重要，因为历史建筑物可以作为景点来吸引游客，从而促进经济发展。 (In the final analysis, I can hardly agree that spending money on new buildings is much better than investing money in traditional buildings. From my perspective, the benefits of preserving old buildings outnumbers those of constructing new houses, in that historic buildings can act as a tourist attraction and thus boost the development of economy.)
NO.5
A/D:
Improving school is the most important factor to successful development of a country.
解析：这个题目含有一个明显的绝对词，即the most important，所以这个题目笔者建议使用“让步à转折à递进”的方式来展开，这样就不需要要想出两道三个分论点。
全文思路结构：
让步段： 不可否认，改善学校对国家的健康发展很重要，因为教育有助于提高全民的整体素质。小学教育和大学教育可以作为两个很好的例子。小学：形成正确的价值观和世 界观。大学：为国家培养个专业人才：外交人才，工程人才，(Admittedly, improving school is an important factor to successful development of a country, in that education can contribute to the improvement of the public quality. The elementary education and the higher education can serve as two example to shed light on this point. )
转折段：但是，改善环境对国家健康发展也很重要，因为干净的环境对于全民的身体健康 有重要影响。(However, bettering the environment is another important factor to the successful development of a country, for a clean environment has an important effect on the health of the public. As we know, the development of a country is closely related to the health of its people. )
递进段：因此，我不能同意改善学校是国家健康发展的最重要的因素。在我看来，改善环 境要比改善学校更加重要，因为一个健康的身体是一切活动(包括教育)的前提。 (In the final analysis, I can hardly agree that improving schools is the most important factor. From my perspective, bettering environment is more important than improving school, in that physical health is the precondition of all activities including the improvement of education.)
NO. 6
In order to succeed, you should be more like others than be different from everyone else.
解析：这个题目含有两个方面，即“与别人一样”和“与别人不一样”，所以使用“让步-转折-递进”的结构来写，
全文思路结构：
让步段：诚然，跟他人一样会成功，可以借鉴他人的经验，找到成功的诀窍。 (Admittedly, people who are like others can achieve success, because they can gain some useful experience and thus find the key to success much easily)比如说，我大表哥在刚进入大学的时候，会去向学长咨询如何获得奖学金，学长告诉了他很多方面的经验，比如说要多参加班级内的活动，多写论 文，然后我的大表哥就按照学长的建议开始好好准备，最终获得了国家奖学金。
转折段：然而，与他人不一样也会成功，因为你可以充分发挥自己的优势，在竞争中脱颖 而出。 (However, being different from others can also make us successful, in that you can put your strength into full play and thus stand out in competition. )例子Bill Gates, Steve Jobs的经历。
结尾段：因此，我很难同意跟别人一样比跟别人不一样更容易成功。 在我看来，这要取决于生活的不同方面。在学习上，我们要尽量和别人一样，这样会与他人处理好关系，从而交到更多朋友。相反，在工作中，我们要尽量和他人不同，这样才能在激烈的竞争中脱颖而出。
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