【转载】2014年11-12月托福写作机经的思路提纲（二）-新东方前途出国

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　　相信不少考生发 现近期各种小范围机经预测的精准度在写作方面都不太尽如人意。在上期的文章当中，笔者为大家准备了近期大有可能考到的机经题目当中的5篇文章框架，供大家去参考和整理，以便大家备考。本期当中，紧呈上期内容，继续为大家提供5道题目的思路总结，后续会不断补充，大家可以持续关注。

　　1. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The main role of a university professor is to educate students rather than to do research.

　　解析：题目中包含明显的两个方面，即“教育学生”和“做研究”。这样的题目推荐大家使用【让步-转折-递进】式写法，这样每个方面只需想出1-2个理由点即可较容易地展开全文。

　　思路归纳：

　　让步段：诚然，大学教授的一个重要的职责是去教育学生，为了帮助他们为将来的事业打下基础。(Admittedly, one of the vital roles of university professors is to educate students for helping undergraduates to lay the foundation for their careers in the near future.)

　　转折段：但不管怎样，教授的另外一个关键的职责是去做学术研究，为了提高这个大学的声誉。(Nevertheless, another crucial role of professors is doing academic research for the sake of raising the prestige of the university.)

　　递进：因此，我很难同意学习教授的主要职责是教育学生而不是研究。在我看来，做研 究其实比仅仅传授知识更有意义。实际上，很多研究能够有效地培养学生们对于某一领域的兴趣，进而激发他们更积极地学习更多知识。(Judging from the evidence offered above, I can hardly agree that the main role of university professors is to educate students rather than to do research. From my perspective, doing academic research is virtually more significant than merely imparting knowledge. In fact, some research can effectively cultivate students’ interests in a certain field and can thus motivate them to acquire more knowledge in this realm energetically. )

　　2. Do you agree or disagree the statement that: Teaching is harder than it was in the past.

　　解析：此题的思路有两种。第一，采用【让步-转折-递进】式写法，让步段阐明“现在教学确实很难”，转折段阐明“但是过去教学也很不易”，最后递进阐 明“其实过去教学更不易”。第二，直接用最直戳了当的【总分总】式写法，笔者认为题目写反驳更容易，所以大家直接对于题目持否定态度，之后铺展2-3个反驳理由即可。下文的思路归纳采用的是第二种写法。

　　思路归纳：

　　理由一：首先，教学比过去更容易了，由于课上使用的先进的教学设施。 (Primarily, teaching is easier than it was in the past owning to the advanced teaching facilities used at class.)

　　理由二：此外，当代教师能够获得更多关于教学法的培训这个事实也应该被考虑进来。 (Moreover, the fact that teachers in this day and age can get more training pertaining to pedagogics should also be taken into consideration.)

　　总结：在最后的讨论当中，尽管有些人认为现在的学生们可以通过网络获得很多知识，而这可能会让他们视了教师在教学中的关键作用，但当我们发现很多网上的知识并不准确时，这样的观点似乎会变得黯淡无光。因此，基于上述理由的给出，我的观点是教学在现在比过去更容易了，因为先进的科技以及教师获得的职业 培训。(In the final analysis, although some people argue that students nowadays can acquire knowledge on the Internet, which might make them ignore the crucial role that teachers play in educating, this notion seems to be lackluster when we realize that a great deal of knowledge on the Internet is actually not accurate. Under this circumstance, it is the teachers that will correct students’ mistakes in understanding those theories. Consequently, based on all the reasons listed above, I reiterate my standpoint that teaching is genuinely easier than it was in the past due to the advanced technology and professional training that teachers gain.)

　　3. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members so there’s no need for the government to help them.

　　解析：题目中包含明显的两个方面，即“依靠自己或家人解决问题”和“依赖政府解决问题”。这样的题目推荐大家使用【让步-转折-递进】式写法，递进可采取【取决于】的思维方式进行进一步讨论。

　　思路归纳：

　　让步段：诚然，人们的确可以依靠自己或家人来解决一些重要问题，尤其是当他们在学习或工作中遇到问题的时候。(Admittedly, people indeed can solve some important problems by themselves or by their families, especially when they encounter with difficulties at school or in workplace.)

　　转折段：但不管怎样，不可否认的是人们依旧需要依赖政府解决一些问题，尤其是那些影响整个社会的大问题。(Nevertheless, it is also incontrovertible that people still have to depend on the government to solve some problems, especially the issues affecting the whole society.)

　　递进段：因此，基于上述理由的给出，我很难同意人们不需要依赖政府只需要依靠家里人或自己解决问题。在我看来，是否需要依靠自己还是依赖政府来解决取决于问题的类型。(Judging from the evidence offered above, I can hardly support that people can solve all kinds of problems by their families or themselves but do not rely on the government. From my perspective, it depends on the type of problems that people meet whether they can solve the problem by themselves or with the help of the government.)

　　4. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The purpose of television is to educate, not to entertain.

　　解析：题目中包含明显的两个方面，即“电视的教育目的”和“电视的娱乐目的”。这样的题目推荐大家使用【让步-转折-递进】式写法，这样每个方面只需想出1-2个理由点即可较容易地展开全文。

　　思路归纳：

　　让步段：诚然，电视节目的一个重要目的是为了教育人们，因为它可以给观众们提供大量的知识。(Admittedly, one vital purpose of television is to educate people, since it can deliver a great deal of knowledge to the audience.)

　　转折段：但不管怎样，同样不可否认的是电视节目的另外一个不可或缺的目的是娱乐大众, 为了让观众释放生活中的压力。(Nevertheless, it is also indisputable that another indispensable purpose of television program is to entertain the public for helping the audience to release their daily pressure.)

　　递进：根据以上证据的给出，我很难同意电视的主要目的是为了教育而不是为了娱乐。在我看来，这很大程度上取决于观众的年龄。(Judging from the evidence offered above, I can hardly agree that the main purpose of television is to educate, not to entertain. From my perspective, it mostly relies on the age of the audience whether the main purpose of the program is to educate or to entertain.

　　5. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In 20 years from now on, students will not use printed books any more.

　　解析：题目中包含明显的绝对词(not…any more)，题目问你是否同意20年之后学生们再也不会使用印刷书了。题目本身比较绝对，因此我们反驳题目会更合理。所以这样的题目推荐大家使用【让步-转折-递进】式写法，我们只需要证明，印刷书尽管数量会减少，但学生们依旧会小范围使用即可成功反驳题目。

　　思路归纳：

　　让步段：诚然，二十年之后学生们将会更频繁地使用电子书，由于它们的可便携性和大容量储存能力。(Admittedly, students in twenty years will use electronic books more frequently due to their portability and large storage capacity.)

　　转折段：但不管怎样，同样不可否认的是学生们将依旧使用印刷书 (Nevertheless, it is indisputable that students will still use printed books in order to avoid the distraction from the electronic gadgets at class.)

　　递进：因此，我很难同意20年之后学生们再也不会使用印刷书了。在我看来，到底学生们会不会使用印刷书取决这位学生的年龄。(Judging from the evidence offered above, I can hardly agree that twenty years later, students will not use printed books any more. From my perspective, it mostly depends on students’ age whether they should choose to use printed books or electronic books to study. )

　　以上是笔者为大家整理的11-12月机经当中的5道题目的全文框架，后续还会继续补充，大家可以依据这些框架练习全文，保质保量博取写作高分。

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