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雅思写作分享(四)转自洛阳新东方前途出国

句子

英语句子开门见山,其主谓结构是全句的“纲”,其余成份是“目”,一般先下结论,后叙事,从近到远,新近发生的事先出现,重心落在句首。汉语句子一般以逻辑关系和时间的先后顺序排列,一般先叙事,后下结论,由远及近,重心落在句尾。这种差异体现了直入与螺旋的不同的思维方式。 

 

中国学生在英语写作时往往会受汉语思维的影响,写出下面的句子: 

1. When I stayed in Guangzhou last month, you helped me. I amgrateful for that.
 

2. Tom’s mother died when he was only two years old, so he did not rememberher. 

3. After we left China in 1959, the natural calamities happened one afteranother for three years in the country. While we read about it at home, we hadbeen dismayed. 

4. It looked rain that evening, yet Dad came all the same. Thatmade us very joyful. 

 

如果按英语直入的思维方式,以上几句要改写成: 

1. I am very grateful for your help to me during my stay inGuangzhou last month.
 

2. Tom did not remember his mother who died when he wasonly two years old. 

3. We had been dismayed at home while reading of the naturalcalamities that happened one after another for three years after we left Chinain 1959. 

4. It looked rain that evening, yet to our great joy, Dad came allthe same. 

未完待续。。。

 

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句子

英语句子开门见山,其主谓结构是全句的“纲”,其余成份是“目”,一般先下结论,后叙事,从近到远,新近发生的事先出现,重心落在句首。汉语句子一般以逻辑关系和时间的先后顺序排列,一般先叙事,后下结论,由远及近,重心落在句尾。这种差异体现了直入与螺旋的不同的思维方式。 

 

中国学生在英语写作时往往会受汉语思维的影响,写出下面的句子: 

1. When I stayed in Guangzhou last month, you helped me. I amgrateful for that.
 

2. Tom’s mother died when he was only two years old, so he did not rememberher. 

3. After we left China in 1959, the natural calamities happened one afteranother for three years in the country. While we read about it at home, we hadbeen dismayed. 

4. It looked rain that evening, yet Dad came all the same. Thatmade us very joyful. 

 

如果按英语直入的思维方式,以上几句要改写成: 

1. I am very grateful for your help to me during my stay inGuangzhou last month.
 

2. Tom did not remember his mother who died when he wasonly two years old. 

3. We had been dismayed at home while reading of the naturalcalamities that happened one after another for three years after we left Chinain 1959. 

4. It looked rain that evening, yet to our great joy, Dad came allthe same. 

未完待续。。。

 

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