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故事与主文书题目的融合

 

 

 

1. What matters most is not necessarily which topic you like the best, but rather which essay paints you in the most positive, interesting light.我们的建议是,最重要的方面并不一定是你最喜欢哪一个主题,而是哪个主题文章能最大程度积极、正面、并有趣地展现自己。 
 

 

 

2. Now since most stories can actually be told in various ways to fit multiple prompts, definitely choose your story first and then choose the prompt for this reason. Unless you have a very clear idea in mind, this usually involves a process known as brainstorming.其实大多数故事都可以有不止一种讲述方式,因此其实也是可以和多个不同的文书题目相连接的。我们建议大家一定要先选故事,再选择common app的文书题目。一般学生都会需要有一个一起头脑风暴的过程。 
 

 

 

3.We usually try to get to know students well on a personal level and understand what makes them think, where their motivation comes from, what their priorities are, and what have been their major life events as well as their background. We recommend students try to approach this from an introspective standpoint to dig deeper into themselves.我们会先在个人层面上与学生交流,了解是什么激发学生的思考,学生的动力来自何处,他们的优先级是什么,以及主要生活经历和个人背景。如果学生独自完成这个过程,可以尝试从内省的角度去开始,也就是自我反思刚才我们提到的这些方面,这样可以更深入地了解自己。 
 

 

 

 如果你已经选定了故事? 
There are still many ways you can write on one topic. For example, you want to write about football since it’s your favorite activity, but what do you write? A general description of your entire football career? The single best game of your life? Showcase your leadership as captain? Or maybe even how you solved a problem related to your time on the team?如果已经选定了内容主题,还是有很多写作方式。比如学生想写橄榄球,那么可以写哪些方面呢?整个足球生涯的总体回顾?踢得最出色的一场比赛?展现作为队长的领导能力?或者是如何解决与团队工作时间相关的问题的?这些都是可以去写成文书的点。 
 
 好的文书有什么特质 
In this part, I really want to talk about the Importance of telling a story, which is the most important thing when you are trying to write a good essay for Common App. Common app essays work best when you focus on story or anecdote from your personal experience. Try to “show” a reader what you mean rather than “tell”. What it means for this essay is that you give an example of your most positive traits through a challenge you faced or a lesson you learned or something important about yourself through a story and then the reader believes it more than if you just listed your positive traits. 我们希望大家能够意识到讲故事的重要性。如果想要文书发挥最大效果,最好集中在个人经历中的一段特定故事。一定要向读者“展现”,而不是简单的“告诉”他们。对于文书写作来说,不管你是要写面对的挑战还是所学到的教训,都要通过一个具体的故事,让这个故事成为你想要展示出的优秀品质最直观的例子。比起一篇文书中列举或者泛谈多个点,一个完整的故事对招生官来说,要可信和直观的多。 
 

 

 

The other reason it’s important to tell a story is that it keeps readers engaged. It’s hard to imagine how tedious essay reading becomes for these AO’s. They read literally thousands of essays per year and the repetition of topics and themes is frequent. A story with action verbs, a clear story arc meaning a beginning middle and end, keeps any reader more engaged, and makes them more likely to enjoy and remember your writing.另一个推荐大家去讲故事的重要原因是,这样读者会很专注,有代入感。招生官读文书的工作可以说是想象以上的乏味,他们每年阅读数以千计的故事,主题的重复经常会有。生动的动态描写,一个清晰的故事线,起承转合,能够激起招生官的兴趣,并使他们更喜欢并记住你的文章。
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