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    【转载】2014年11-12月托福写作机经的思路提纲(一)

    2014-11-09
                            

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    201411-12月托福写作机经的思路提纲(一)

      相信不少考生发现近期各种小范围机经预测的精准度在写作方面都不太尽如人意。很多考生总是在考前准备了三五个题目之后发现考场上自己还是乱了阵脚,因为一旦机经不中,仅凭小范围的几个练习题目根本达不到考试拿高分的要求。鉴于目前这样的现状,笔者建议大家采取的办法是,大量练习大范围机经里面的题目,扩大准备范围,这样中题的几率便会增大。即使大范围依旧没有中,凭着考前大量的练习相信大家也能够在考场上灵活应对。下面,笔者为大家整理出了近期大范围机经当中常出现的并且还没有考到过的题目思路纲要,供大家把握大方向去准备和练习。本期为大家提供5道题目的思路总结,后续会不断补充,大家可以持续关注。

      1. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students could receive a better, more efficient education if they spend 11 months a year studying. (080330)

      解析:题目中包含明显的两个方面,即学生每年学习11个月和学习少于11个月(比如9-10个月)。这样的题目推荐大家使用【让步-转折-递进】式写法,这样会让理由的思考变得极为简单。

      思路归纳:

      让步段:诚然,学生每年学习11个月确实有好处,为了接受更大量的不同领域的知识。 (Admittedly, it is beneficial for students to study eleven months a year in order to acquire a greater deal of knowledge related to various realms. )

      转折段:但不管怎样,学生每年只学习9-10个月也是明智的,为了使自己休息过来并更高效地学习。(Nevertheless, it is also sensible for students to study only nine or ten months a year for effectively refreshing themselves and learning more efficiently. )

      递进:因此,我很难同意学习11个月能够使学生获得更优的教育。实际上,一年只学习9-10个月会更好,因为学生们可以利用空闲时间培养兴趣和其他技能。(Judging from the evidence offered above, I can hardly agree that leaning eleven months a year can help students to receive better education. Virtually, allowing students to study only nine or ten months is more advisable, since students can use the spare time to foster their interests in different fields and develop various practical skills.

      2. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should assign homework to students every day. (080427)

      解析:此题的思路有两种。第一,将every day视为题目中的绝对词,针对本词对题目进行反驳,采用【让步-转折-递进】式写法。第二,直接用最直戳了当的【总分总】式写法,保持对题目的肯定,证 明老师们确实每天应该给学生布置作业,之后铺展2-3个支持理由。下文的思路归纳采用的是第二种写法。

      思路归纳:

    理由一:首先,每天给学生布置作业是明智的,为了更有效且更高效地掌握课堂知识。 (Primarily, it is sensible for students to do homework every day in order to command knowledge taught at class more effectively and efficiently.)



    理由二:此外,每天给学生们布置作业是必要的,为了在课下将知识成功地应用到实践当中。(Moreover, it is essential and beneficial for students to be assigned homework every day for the sake of successful application of theory and knowledge after class.)

      总结:因此,基于上述理由的给出,我的观点是做作业是一个值得被保留的传统,为了学生们对知识更好的理解和应用。(Consequently, based on all the reasons listed above, I reiterate my standpoint that doing homework is a tradition that is worthy of being carried out to secure students of better understanding and apt application of new knowledge. )

      3. Drivers have to pay a fee for driving in busy city streets when there is a great amount of traffic. (080712)

      解析:此题问法比较直接,并且题目中不包含任何绝对词,所以直接采取【总分总】式写法即可,支持题目和反驳题目都可以尝试。下文的思路归纳采用的是支持题目的写法,也就是支持司机应该在高峰期缴费。

      思路归纳:

      理由一:首先,缴费可以缓解交通堵塞的问题,帮助人们节省时间。 (Primarily, requiring drivers to pay a fee in rush hours can help alleviate the problem of traffic jam and thus help people to save much time.)

      理由二:此外,由于需要缴费,人们可能更多选择使用公共交通,进而可以帮助解决空气质量问题。(Moreover, people might opt for public transportation more frequently due to the fee that they will pay if they drive a car, which is beneficial to solve the problem of air pollution.)

      总结:因此,基于上述理由的给出,我的观点是司机应该在高峰期缴费,为了节省时间并 且缓解空气质量问题恶化。(Consequently, based on all the reasons listed above, I reiterate my standpoint that drivers should pay a fee for driving in rush hours for the sake of saving time and avoiding deterioration of air pollution. )

      4. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone. (081207)

      解析:题目中包含明显绝对词(best),此时我们想证明best其实很难,基本在逻辑上无法证明,所以反驳题目比较好写。但是我们发现独处确实也可以让我们缓解压力,所以完全反驳题目似乎也不太合理,因此本题目推荐大家使用【让步-转折-递进】式写法。

      思路归纳:

      让步段:诚然,独处确实是有效的方式缓解压力,因为可以不被任何人打扰。 (Admittedly, spending time alone is genuinely a good and effective way for people to release pressure for not being disturbed by others.)

      转折段:但不管怎样,和他人在一起也是放松自己的好方法,尤其是和自己的家人与朋友在一起。(Nevertheless, being with others can also be regarded as a good and available way to relax oneself, especially with one’s families and friends.)

      递进:因此,我很难同意独处是缓压的最好的方式。在我看来,是否独处是缓压的好方式取决定于一个人的性格。(Judging from the evidence offered above, I can hardly agree that spending time alone is the best way for people to relax. From my perspective, it mostly hinges on one’s personality whether he or she should choose spending time alone or with other to reduce stress.

      5. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.(121202)

      解析:题目中包含明显的比较级(more than),题目问电影和电视对于年轻人行为的积极影响是不是大于消极影响。很显然,如果我们能够证明消极影响和积极影响一样多,那么我们就能够成功地反驳消极影响大于积极影响。所以这样的题目推荐大家使用【让步-转折-递进】式写法,这样我们只需要将消极影响和积极影响各写一方面的理由即可成功反驳题目。

      思路归纳:

      让步段:诚然,电影和电视确实对年轻人的行为有一些消极影响,因为它们可能扭曲青少年的价值观。(Admittedly, movies and televisions do have some negative effects on the way that young people behave, in that they may distort adolescents’ values.)

      转折段:但不管怎样,电影和电视也对年轻人的行为有较多积极影响,因为它们可以激发孩子们的学习热情。(Nevertheless, it is indisputable that movies and televisions also have numerous positive influences on young people’s behaviors, since they can stimulate youngsters’ enthusiasm of learning.)

      递进:因此,我很难同意电影和电视对于年轻人的消极影响大于积极影响。在我看来,这很大程度上取决于电影的类型。(Judging from the evidence offered above, I can hardly agree that movies and televisions have more negative effects than positive ones on young people’s behaviors. From my perspective, it mostly depends on the type of movies whether their negative influences outweigh the positive ones. )

      以上是笔者为大家整理的11-12月机经当中的5道题目的全文框架,后续还会继续补充,大家可以依据这些框架练习全文,保质保量博取写作高分。

     

     

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