刘老师雅思课堂之写作topic-儿童教育(child education)
同学们好:
今天刘老师和大家分享一个经常会遇见的雅思写作话题-儿童教育,作为写作的热门topic,大家一定要多总结关键词汇,熟悉可能涉及到的热门的分论点,一定要多进行归纳总结,比如网络,游戏,追星,应试教育,娱乐综艺节目,社会义工及实践对中小学生产生的影响。这些话题都可以归类到未成年人的教育问题,也就是child education。那么下面就以电脑对中小学生影响这个真题作为例子,看看怎样来描述自己的观点。
Topic: Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree?
首先拿到这种问题的时候一定要明确自己的观点,写正面观点和反面观点其实都可以,只要自圆其说,有充分的论据支持。论据的选择可以有很多,举个例子:
Drawbacks of using a computer:
1. The main concern is about the type of computer activities that attract children. These are often electonic games that tend to be very intense and rather violent.
2. Too much exposure to using a computer has a negative influence on children's physical health.
3. Oversuing the computer would be likely to demage children's interaction with their parents and peers.
Benefits of using a computer:
1. The obvious benefits of computer skills for young children cannot be denied.
2. it is more convenient for children to keep in touch with their parents and peers in the daily life.
3. online courses become more popular recntly which provides a variety of study resouces and choices for our children.
关于教育的论点还有很多,大家可以根据自己的所闻所感来总结,下面给大家一些此话题关键词和短信做参考:
create distractoins | 造成注意力分散 | in terms of | 从···方面来说 |
be obsessed with | 对···着迷 | place children at risk | 让孩子处在危险当中 |
internet addiction | 网瘾 | psychological development | 心理发展 |
rely on | 对···的依赖 | physical activity | 身体的运动 |
excessive | 过度的,过量的,过分的 | social interaction | 互动 |
impair | 损害,伤害 | isolate sb. From | 使某人与···脱离 |
impair vision | 损坏视力 | indifferent | 不关心的 |
miullennium | 一千年,千年期 | immense | 使陷于 |
用谷歌搜索 | be immersed in | 陷于 | |
a social concern | 一个社会问题 | exposure | 暴露,接触 |
poor academic performance | 学术表现差 | too much exposure to | 过多的接触 |
arise from | 由···引发 | aggressive behavior | 好斗的行为 |
widespread computer use | 电脑的广泛使用 | vulnerable | 易受伤的,脆弱的 |
beneficial | 有益的,有利的 | take advantage of | 利用 |
harmful | 有害的,致伤的 | educational programs | 教育节目 |
moderation | 节制,适度 | instructional | 指导的,教育的 |
be moderate | 适度 | outlet | 发泄的途径 |
be inundated with | 被···充斥着 | ease their pressure | 缓解他们的压力 |
appropriate | 适合的 | pornography | 色情描绘,色情表演 |
impose a limit on computer time | 强加电脑使用时间的限制 | imitate | 模仿 |
classify | 把···分类 | passive learning style | 被动的学习方式 |
block | 堵塞 |
下面给大家一篇范文(一般范文的雅思水平在7分左右)
I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much time spent on the computer every day. This is partly because sitting in front of a screen for too long can be damaging to both the eyes and the physical posture of a young child, regardless of what they are using computer for.
However the main concern is about the type of computer activities that attract children. These are often electonic games that tend to be very intense and rather violent. The player is usually the hero of the game and too much exposure can encourage children to be self-centered and insensitive to others.
Even when children use a computer for other purposes, such as getting information or emailing friends, it is no substitute for human interaction. Spending time with other children and sharing non-virtual experiences is an important part of a child's development that cannot be provided by a computer.
In spite of this, the obvious benefits of computer skills for young children cannot be denied. Their adult world will be changing constantly in terms of technology and the internet is the key to all the knowledge and information available in the world today. Therefore it is important that children learn at an early age to use the equipment enthusiastically and with confidence as they will need these skills throughout their studies and working lives.
I think the main point is to make sure that young children do not overuse computers. Parents must ensure that their children learn to enjoy other kinds of activity and not simply sit at home, learning to live in a virtual world.
一般议论文就是五段式结构,开篇明确观点,然后两段支持的观点,一段反面观点,最后点题。议论文一定要辩证的分析问题的正方面,这样也更好组织语言,和丰富文章的内容,一定要逻辑清晰,观点明确哦。好啦,今天的刘老师讲堂就到这,我们下期再见~